AndNeverAgainx3

just ordered it =]]]]

XD i just kind of copied it from microsoft word and i didn't really think about proper spacing and everything. i don't know if you can edit things you've already ...

The composition of this story has been in process for almost three years and the first novel is almost done. I want to know who thinks that my introduction/first chapter ...

Your details are incredibly in-depth and they really draw the reader in. However, detail can only get you so far. I have the same problem--I go incredibly rich in details ...

I agree with the other critics--considering your age, this is exemplary writing. I think, however, that the story is moving along too quickly. We have JUST been introduced to Quinn, ...