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were hunted by miniature polar bears...

i like your detai. intriguing beginning! corrections: -you have a sentence describing rain clouds, and then you say that the clouds promise rain. don't say rain the first time you ...

Longest one thus far, so I split it up. Tell me what ya think =] Chapter Three Wednesday The following afternoon, as I walked into my one remaining class (chemistry, ...

oh, that's just a random chapter wayyyy in the future that i was pissed off with and i wanted to see what other people thought of it =]]

1st picture: your dad's house, right? very pretty. 2nd: sepia and feet! me likey! 3rd: that's pretty much gorgeous. 4th: that one's my favorite 5th: was that the annoying kid ...

that was really good! i liked it! was there any metaphorical meaning?

i love it! the detail is amazing, as are the transitions. you introduce the scenery AND the main character AND her life problems [or maybe just some] all in a ...

kind of depressing, and it could use more detail, but i like how it ends. =] keep writing!

great beginning =]] i love adventure/fantasy stories. keep it up! yeah, i want to be a music journalist too! i love going to concerts and listening to all types of ...

I did this concert review for the web site I work for, Drivenfaroff.com. It's an amazing music news site. Check it out! This is the link to my review , ...

hahaha, i love it! you have a way with words!

oo. intriguing. usually i'm into the whole teen realistic fiction stuff, but this is good too! its a refreshment from some stale stories i have seen on the forum. keep ...

ooo. i'm liking it so far. XD i love fantasy books! just can't write 'em. it is very intriguing, but in this case i think you should have maybe an ...

First off: Lots of grammatical errors. If you want, I will help you sort them out. It's interesting. But you shouldn't start out with all of those descriptions. You might ...