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i really like it! you know i love your short stories so that will probably not come as a surprise ;] 2 things: 1) "Well...I could go off into a ...

I LOVED THIS. great, intriguing, compelling, unique short story. really great. i suck at writing short stories, so when i see a great one like this, i am incredibly jealous. ...

chocoholic, i don't think it's scary. sure, it's not all fluffliness and rainbows and whatnot, and it's definitely intense, but it's not persay creepy. schizophrenic people face that type of ...

i really liked it! really compelling for a short story! but it CAN be difficult to understand at times. the character HIMSELF states that he is a demon, and yet ...

i loved it! it was really compelling, especially for a short story! so the ending WAS supposed to imply that they were eating him, then? vair interesting. idk why but ...

it's definitely cute, but maybe you should establish a bit more information about the characters? also, why does audrey go from showing autumn her laptop to taking autumn to go ...

i really do like it! i think a bit more background information about diana, her relationships with kate and aj, and all of that jazz, should be included, though. & ...

ah, i like it all the better now that you've told us that, chocoholic! and i liked it before! but, yes, you should make it more clear that she is ...

ah, this is such a relief from some other really typical stories i've seen on yws...and in books, actually. great job! keep writing!

oo, very interesting/intriguing/good/unconventional. me gusta! and everyone needs to stop with the purple;; people DO have purple (violet?) eyes it doesn't mean this should go in fantasy unless your c

i think it was nice and interesting =) could be a tad longer, but you know, it's not as though you have to lengthen it. =) keep writing!

marcus flint is the name of that one dood in harry potter XD lots of grammatical errors, but you can fix those =) just develop a bit more of a ...

i think people are being a bit too picky. since this is JUST an idea thus far, it's a really good start. very imaginative. =) keep writing!

i am not much for critiquing poems since i am more of a storywriter myself, but i thought this was excellent and i loved it!! =D

hahaha claudette changed my post to dang yeah cuz i said a bad word =X XDD