AnAmericanTeenager

Dear dragonlover92, I love this poem!! I love how it turned the tables at the end. There is no things that i can see that need to be improved. Perfect ...

Dear writingabook200, I love this poem. You are such a good poet. I love the repetition in this piece. But if I were you I would right the poem in ...

Dear psudiname, Are you going to turn this story into a novel? If not you should. You are a great writer!! There is nothing that needs improvement, at least not ...

This is about a guy that I am falling more and more in love with, but I am not allowed to love I wonder... I think... But I do not ...

(: I love this song!!!!! It is great! It is easy to relate to! I feel like I understand what you are going through. There are some things that could ...

This is such a sweet story. I really enjoyed reading it. You are such a good writer. I feel like this story just abruptly ended, though. It's almost as if ...

I absolutely love this poem!! I love the creativity in this piece. I can almost here the character's fists pounding against the door. However I feel like poems should leave ...

I am different I wonder what will happen I hear the screams echo down the halls of my penitentiary I see fire and destruction in the eyes of the stranger ...

I'll hide in the corner I'll cry alone I'll shy away Let someone else be the star I'll shy away I'll live a life without love I'll let you take ...

Lost in a sea of strangers Silently they call my name Hands grasping onto me Pulling me in many directions Soft sobs of indecision Love always comes with pain

Overall It was a good piece, but there were a few flaws. I loved how I could relate to exactly what you were saying, most of the time. I feel ...

Look, You see right through me As if I am not there. You start to notice who I am, Here she comes, And Once again, I disappear.