AnAmericanTeenager

Dear KatTrain , Wow! This poem left me utterly speechless! It is o good! I find creeping, crawling ways to miss the spices of your skin I absolutely love the ...

Dear murtuza , To be honest this form of poetry isn't my specialty. However, this piece is exceptionally unique and interesting. I love it!!! Here's the story, of two young ...

Lost him, Lost a friend, Made me cry, Made me scream, Words are deadly things, She makes mad, She makes me want to leave, Lost in a world of misunderstanding, ...

I love the 2nd one!!!!! Re-size them if possible!!! They are really good! :)

Dear kaylamarie004, Its like a sixth sense I carried though his presence I suggest you revize the way this is phrased maybe you meant, "It's like a sixth sense I ...

Are you too scared? Afraid to show everyone, The real you is hiding, No-one knows the things you've been through, They will never know, You hide everything from the world, ...

This is about my dad, who was never there for me :( Why did he leave? Am I not good enough? Did I do something? I feel like I am ...

Dear amygabb , Smoke Screen I stand, proud, Surrounded by the shambles of my glass house. I love the metaphor!! Glinting off the splinters, I glimpse the reflection of my ...

Dear darchoco , I keep swimming in this blackened water deeper than hell, currents stronger than pain, but I tire. My mind cries for rest, My body only obeys, My ...

Dear Mikko , I love it and understand it perfectly!! I wouldn't change a thing! I love the symbolism and deepness of the piece. I feel how you feel which ...

don't read if you don't want the mystery of this poem to be ruined The whole point of this poem (for you who don't understand) is to be mysterious, dark, ...

Dear Arwen, I love this poem!! You are a good writer. If you follow the directions stated by the others: You will be an even better writer. :) -AnAmericanTeenager

Dear EtCetera, This poem is filled with intense emotions. That is what I like most about it. I feel like the others have pretty much said it all. I just ...

Scream, Yell, Throw a fit. Lose your mind. Leave home. Choose your friends. Choose her. I don't care. Be selfish, And Lose me forever. You don't care, You never have. ...

I absolutely LOVE this poem!!!