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  • Welcome Mat Re: Well, just look what the cat dragged in.

    I can't wait for Alice in Wonderland either! It's gonna be great ^_^ I listen to all kinds of music, my life revolves around it so my list can go ...

    Oct 10, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: When The Cheese Attacked.

    Haha, well there's an interesting way of getting yourself to write! I need to get my friends to spit out something random for me O_O I liked it, It sounds ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Lyrics Re: The Devil is in The House (Hard Rock)

    This was entertaining! I really enjoyed it =) I have a little nitpick, it's just an opinion, really. Because of my job my heart is so stony I REALLY like ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The sky flashes Zeus’s golden lightning

    I really liked this one! The imagery you provided was just great. "The sun shyly searches amid the cloud." -I loved this line =) I enjoy reading your writing! Keep ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Keeping the Dead Company

    Well, this is basically a story that is told through two character's prospectives. By two lovers. It's a confession, from the both of them. Pretty Ironic actually. ------------------------------------

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: you kill me

    This poem was very... blunt and straight-forward I must say, which I liked. I like how this character is ending their life, just to hurt somebody else's. It was pretty ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Stories of the Wind

    Great piece of writing! I like the message, and the way you portray the wind as a wise, old friend. It was very entertaining. The flow was great as well, ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Lyrics Re: All The Scars That Spell Out Your Name...

    The title is just great. It paints a very great picture for the reader. People say hate is such a strong word, but people throw love around like it's nothing. ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Lyrics Re: Just A Memory - short version

    This was very touching. It definitely sounds like an older person is saying this, you did a great job with the word choice. I especially liked the ending, it was ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Don't Forget

    Remembering your purpose is very important, otherwise, why are we here? I really enjoyed this! I do agree, some of the lines are bit too long, however, if you were ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Well, just look what the cat dragged in.

    Thanks! Yes, I have seen Sweeney Todd. I love Tim Burton. He's just amazing. The ending of that movie has imprinted such a vivid picture in my head. I loved ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I coughed once for God

    This was interesting, short, but very interesting. I myself once thought that in some form. It's rather unfortunate that I did, but it's the truth. I really didn't find anything ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Well, just look what the cat dragged in.

    Hello all! My name is Matt, I write *Ahem* I mean when I have time. I like any kind of art that is Macabre in fashion. No, I'm not some ...

    Oct 6, 2008


Always do what you are afraid to do.
— E. Lockhart, We Were Liars