AmyCx

I was quite impressed by this piece. I think the main problem was that there was no background - some explanation in the beginning of the second scene would have ...

Thanks for the advice Conrad and Evi :) I've hit a dead end with this story and probably won't be going back to it for a while, but if I ...

I really enjoyed reading this story :) I wouldn't have guessed that there was more that we hadn't read, I think you filled us in pretty well. For some reason, ...

I'm another Killers fan - their Sawdust album was my companion during a really long writing session in the summer and I still can't listen to it now without being ...

I loved The Mortal Instruments series! I remember my friend read 'City of Bones' back in June and was raving about this amazing book. I held off reading it for ...

I really enjoyed this story - and I wouldn't worry about it being too 'Bridget Jones', it's written in a very different style. It would probably improve with a little ...

I loved how this story was very passionate - very beautiful prose when the narrator speaks about his girlfriend. I agree with the earlier point about the narrator's friend; the ...

I really liked this story - great flashback/dream at the beginning, it was so vivid I wouldn't have guessed it wasn't reality. Also, I particularly love the line, 'her hips ...

Only heard of Theory of a Deadman from that list, but I like your taste! 8/10 'The Greatest Denier' - Doves 'Time Honoured Tradition' - Kaiser Chiefs 'Believe Me Natalie' ...

First chapter of a (hopefully) long story. * The sun was low in the sky, bleeding palely over the Liverpool skyline. It highlighted the hodgepodge mix of buildings; old cathedrals ...

I loved this - but is it a short story or the first chapter/prologue of a larger one? The pace was good, not too slow, but slow enough to cover ...

Hey AmberJane, nice to meet another newbie :) I know, my friends are all very supportive and lovely but only a few actually read anything. I like to write real-life-type ...

I'm incredibly impressed by this story! The Grahams are such a vivid family, I could picture them all perfectly. I love the use of adjectives in 'The Grahams'. Describing the ...

Thanks Conrad :) It was great talking in chat. I'm busy trying to find stories to review now, I'm quite paranoid in case I say something too harsh and someone ...

I have 992 songs on my Sony Walkman which, okay, isn't technically an iPod. But still, I love it, and its contents, very much! At the moment, I'm listening to ...