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Can anyone please help me out with this?

Thank you! I will probably now write Carrie's perspective in first person. Everyone is saying it would be better so I'll give it a shot!

No one has any clue?

I was thinking that people may become confused about the character switch, I debated between telling Carrie's part in first or third person. I thought that if I went third ...

Haha it's cool, I wasn't saying you copied that or anything. Anyways, fell free to send me a PM when you post the next part or a reedit, if you ...

No problem, I also like Aiden, even though I keep getting flashbacks to A Door Within By Thomas Baston (I think that that is the Author's name) :)

IRRELEVANT TO STORY INTRO: Hey guys, I decided to post my first edit of chapter one. I'm looking for tips on writing style and punctuation. Because I feel VERY rusty. ...

I agree with everything jokeless said, the biggest one being with the names. I understand it's set a long time ago but boring names bring down the relationship between the ...

Hi! First I like the idea. It's original and has a lot of potential. I had a couple minor problems though: It should be His body they’ll find. His shouldn't ...

I like it, it's dark, compelling and original! At first I pictured the predator as a wolf, but if it has claws it has to be a cougar or a ...

In my book right now I'm trying to have my protagonist hear a little girl crying from the bedroom, I want it to be a surprise in the story so ...

Thanks! Cool :)

Hi guys, basically right now I'm working on a screenplay. It's the screenplay to the sequel of Cirque Du Freak: The Vampire's Assistant. Since I'm a fan and I have ...

Haha, OK thanks!

So let's say I post my story chapter by chapter. But only post my first draft. It would be ok to repost the fully finished version (Even if it's just ...