Amnien

Hey! New guy here haha. Anyways I would very much like a review. :)Link to my story is in my sig.

No problem!

I see your point Daydream, what I meant by fast paced was, to me, it seemed like the story was going to fast for the characters to keep up with. ...

Hello Beautiful! Haha anyways, I liked it. But some advice, I learned yesterday, is to wait about a week before posting another chapter. That way everyone has a chance to ...

Wow, Bond! I liked this a lot. I really, really liked the ending. The whole story I could picture perfectly, I also could relate to the character. (Because I love ...

Hey! I will gladly appreciate a review! Thanks :) Oh the story is in my sig. It's called Daring Frankie and it's the first chapter to my short story! Thanks ...

Thanks! :)

Thanks beautiful (It's in your name :P) I'll gladly PM you when I post my other part

I figured you did it for a reason. Just wanted to make sure, ya know, didn't want a good idea wasted :P Haha.

I'm not really that experienced and the junior writer title comes with upping your post count, I think it's fifteen so you are only three off, but thanks for the ...

Hey! Your writing style, I love it! Haha. Anyways just adding a little bit more too Jasmine's review: You should change up your vampires. Make 'em original. Only because everyone ...

I really liked your story! I liked the detail you gave and I have a question. Is this going to be a novel or a short story? Cause I have ...

Hey! I would very much like a review. :) I would just like truth. Either nice or harsh. But if it's harsh don't go over the top rude if you ...

K cool. Thanks for the tip :)

Haha. I don't want to sound like a typical "Salesman" but when I post more, feel free to read and find out :) I'm almost finished with the first draft. ...