Amniel

Thanks very much for reviewing! We have a saying in Finland; "Kiitos tuhannesti" which crudely translates to "Thanks for a thousand times" not sure how correct that sounds though so ...

I wrote this when I had a moment of loneliness and depression. Did a little polishing and refining afterwards. This is also my first poem in the noble language of ...

That wasn't exactly...great. Oh well. Most of the issues have already been covered but I want to remind you again. I through a rope you through a rope? I think ...

Sakura, you stole my favorite phrase :evil: oh well, I guess I shouldn't complain. Finalnd was never ruled by vikings. Well onto the main things; I think the whole first ...

Here I am as, as...well not promised...lets say expected. I disagree with you only on one thing, I think myself as a way more annoying person than you, and I ...

Go Bobby! This was well written but for few things. The only major issue was that it didn't seem to lead anywhere: we have no idea what actually he is ...

Good start. Great use of language. But I have a few things to note. You should merge the mini chapters into one single chapter. Alos, you should slow down the ...

Here as..well not promised but...expected 8) picked up another sound- human feet That refers tot the humn feet as being a sound, not its maker. When Bane awoke and you ...

Sounds cool 8) Albeit a bit cliche I have to admit. How am I gonna get this long enough for it to count as a review, oh well. (I switch ...

Fanfic of Warhammer. Dwarfs do tie up their hair with rings, I think. Thanks for reviewing. Tried to think of a more interesting beginning... please someone comment on the story ...

It felt like the world was dead. There was no wind, animals made no noise, nor did they move. Birds suddenly stopped singing, horses stopped neighing, and even men stayed ...

Note that I'm dead tired when reviewing... :roll: Well there were actually not so many differences to the older chapter one, which I accidentaly happened to review :? fiercely attacking ...

Here it is, ladies and gentlemen: The treasure chest of answers :roll: (though of course not everything yet). Chapter Three It started to rain. I liked to refer the falling ...

How about: A crazy man with a dagger saw me on the street, and used me in his some kind of escape scheme I'll even be ready to do the ...

The river was told of in chapter one... well maybe I'll change it somehow. Chapter three will begin to open up the treasure chest of answers. Wow what a cool ...