Amniel

I liked most of the poem. Some parts however I felt didn't sit in the rhyme, particularly in the beginning, and the beginning was as Vox had said very vague, ...

Like JFW1415 said, the story is all tell. I too hate such stories, as they give nothing to connect with to the characters, or the places. Most of the story ...

6/10 not that interesting...

The drawing doesn't bring Jiggity's eyes out very well 8) but...oh well. Good work. The best way to shade jelly (as I have noticed) is in two steps 1) Draw ...

Banned for using caps needlessly.

8/10

banned for banning someone who likes a great author 8)

Banned for not liking weird things. Weird :ftw:

banned cause for some reason my sig doesn't show... :cry: EDIT: Oh now it does. Well for not having read Regina's Song!

Banned for not having "David Eddings :ftw: " in your sig

This is probably the most boring chapter so far...well you always need to have one such slow chapter I guess...but you finally explained why they have such weird names :lol: ...

Gave yourselfa gold star eh? Oh well... why do you write lose as loose, its only one o. Other than that I have nothing else to comment. Was this for ...

That was great stuff! The imagery was great, rhyming excellent and it flowed nigh perfectly. I like the subject and your way to portray it but i do have some ...

This was great :!: I like how the poem flowed, but I think the third stanza was the most awkward for some reason. Probably because all the other ones were ...

Okay now for the review. I think your idea is interesting, but sometimes blocky language and a start without anything to really make us care what happens, makes it hard ...