Amira15

i like the flow ,Very well chosen words

The twins reached the Docks. The crossroad between Man and those who aren't. Where wealthy humans would purchace items from other species just to keep up with the latest trends. ...

Its a nice poem, many people have to go through it so you can connect. Keep writing!!

Thanks for the advice! :) No chatspeak.

OMg Love it when you close your eyes and dream you see the future,you can shape it and hold it in your head until your actually there.

OMg Love it you can close your eyes and dream you see the future,you can shape it and hold it in your head until your actually there.

so much emotion capture this and have such beautiful rhymes .Manufique!

ooh i love it, could've introduced the characters a bit better but, other than that A very addictive story!

This is a verry intriguing piece

Sereen Had just arrived at her Grandmothers house. It was the day after her 20th birthday so she went to see her Grandmother."Grandmother Tonia" she called in the small but ...

Much Needed Get away Take me away , Help Me get out, Help me escape to your escape rout. Where you go to break Free,Were ever you go please take ...