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Re: I could use some feed back... [18+]
I'd read it :D Just so you know :) I agree with EloquentDragon about the beginning of the story - it's a little unprofessional and doesn't really rope the reader ...
Apr 16, 2012
I'd read it :D Just so you know :) I agree with EloquentDragon about the beginning of the story - it's a little unprofessional and doesn't really rope the reader ...
Apr 16, 2012