Amice

Mkay, I made a few alterations... is this any better?? :-k In the moment of anguish I was numb to the pain That was silently killing my spirit. Now the ...

Aahhh... I love it.!!! I feel like this was written from my heart! Just to combine the first two reviews, I don't think it's too short, and I don't care ...

Fantastical I'm impressed Run with me as we fly completely free Where there's many places to go and see, Laugh with me as your heart glows Where the cool waters ...

Very good! I like it lots! Except... :) But she'll never cry when she falls down A child? Never cry when she falls down? I just don't think that to ...

"Penny for your thoughts", I said to the young girl standing outside the market. I was in a fine mood, having just spent most of my paycheck on a few ...

This little tale is kind of depressing! But that is likely your intention, I'm sure. I suppose it was... After a terribly emotional experience... I was so upset I thought ...

In my own humble personal little opinion... :P I didn't care for the adjective exploding because it brings to mind things like dynamite and fireworks. Not something like snowclouds. But ...

Count of Monte Cristo by Dumas. Larger than Life characters, intriguing plot, dynamic heroism, revenge, treasure, and more! What more can you ask?!? Exactly! Definitely a favorite of mine... I've ...

10/10 for the pronunciation guide 5/10 for the second line which I don't like but couldn't think of anything else at the moment Ha! I just rated my own... signature. ...

7/10 ^ the imagery brought that up from a five -Amice-

In the moment of grief I was numb to the pain Running deep to the core of my being. Now the ache of my heart Is returned by the mirror ...

Thanks !!! :) (I thought it was kinda retarded for someone called "Fool, the stupid one" to be giving me information, but whatever...) -Amice-

PLEASE someone say SOMETHING ?!?! :shock:

do you mean self is dying because you become one with another person so it's not just you anymore? Poppi, Yes that's the general idea. Love gives rather than takes. ...

Hi Nate (or anyone else who will help) I would like to know how many posts are required for the each different "title" (New Member, Novice, Junior Writer, etc.) Is ...