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Hi there! Okay, just to get this out of the way: I really hope you continue this, because the ending was a cliffhanger. I liked how the concept of this ...

This was really sweet. I liked the description of her and just basically the scenario in the very beginning. It was really detailed and written in a cool way. Although ...

I loved this, until the very end. Was this a chain email? xD I'm sorry, but you could've at least gotten rid of that last part about "sending it to ...

Awww, I was looking forward to reading this. :( If it's of any help, and since it's basically the only words on here, the title was what drew me in. ...

Hi there! I really liked this song. When I was reading the chorus the first time through, I found myself hearing this as a pop song. Yeah, I know. ;) ...

Wow, that was a really cool ending. I don't know what it was about this, but it seemed really artistic to me. Although I have to say, the title was ...

This sounded exactly like one of the internet safety lectures we occasionally get at school. I lost interest about half-way through, but I managed to make it to the end. ...

Oh my gosh! The last sentence that Keith said just about broke my heart! "Am I like my daddy?" Keith is so innocent, and I'm on the verge of tears ...

Wow. The ending of this piece was so powerful and descriptive. Seriously, this story keeps getting better and better! I'm glad that Nora and Alec get to finally meet. I've ...

I like how this story has two main characters. It adds a whole other side to the story. I'm glad you explained who Connor was, and why she had to ...

Haha I like this. The sarcasm was a nice change from everything else I've been reading today, so thank you for that. But I like the point that you (sort ...

You're right, I think it is lacking something, but I can't quite put my finger on it. I'm a little confused about what this poem is about though. It just ...

I liked this one. I felt like it took a small step for the story, but at least now you know what he's going to do next. But I think ...

Hi! Well, this piece certainly has a lot of potential! ;) To me, it seems like you started at the end of a story. Bt I want to know what ...

I liked this piece, although it sounds oddly familiar to The Thief Lord. Anyways, I liked the description in this piece, especially in the beginning. I also liked how you ...