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Re: Unrealistic
Hey there! I liked this, although it seemed weird. And I have a question: Why is this called Unrealistic? Is it because it's unrealistic? Here's going to be my list ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: May Day Review Day Review
I don't mean to brag, but... I CAN'T BELIEVE I GOT NUMBER 3 REVIEWER OF MAY DAY! :D That is all.
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Hello every one
Hey there! You seem very mysterious. We don't know anything about you. Nice. ;) Haha just kidding. Anyways, I'm glad you joined YWS. I'm amazed at how many new people ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: PLAIN JANE
Hey there! :) First of all, I love your name. :) I'm so glad you joined YWS. I know you're gonna love it here. Okay, what you said about you ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Alright, so I'm ne here....
Well, guys, I'm new here, and I'm just curious as to the nature of this site. Can we share serious pieces here? Do we just talk about things? Can we ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: (I'm) A Shadowed Girl
Hi there! I liked this poem, even though it was a tad depressing. ;) This was really powerful, and I got a mental picture of a girl hiding in an ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: April 2011 Statistics
D: What happened to Maine? We're the Maine-iacs!
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Colorful
Hi there! I liked this. The detail was really good, and I loved how you weaved the emotion into it. I especially liked how you used the balloon metaphor. This ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Allegra Prologue/Chp. 1
Hi there! This was pretty good. The detail was amazing, first of all. Although the plot was a little confusing. Then again, it's onyl the first chapter. Anyway, I was ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: 1930's Narrative
Hi there again! I feel compelled to review all of your work, and this is the last one! WOO HOO! ;) Anyways, I really liked this. Yeah, some of the ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Prologue)
Hi there! Okay, I was a little confused with this. It sounds very modern, but it doesn't seem very modern with the fact that this girl's father is setting her ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Lemons
Hi there! I liked this. It was so simple and clean, and I just liked the end of the story especially. I think you might've wanted to go more in ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Why?
I don't really know what the song is about, so whatever images that flash through your head while reading will be appreciated! Verse 1: I don’t understand What or who ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: How'd you discover YWS?
My friend, Funkymomo told me about it. I'm honestly not sure how she found it though, but I'm sure glad she did! xD
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Flight 764-Chapter 4.1
Hi again! Once again, I smiled at the end. :) So now I see that "Osama" does have something to do with the story. Although I was thrown off at ...
May 2, 2011
