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Really sorry!

That was a really cool piece. I liked the mysterious part of the song. But I was kind of sad at the end, but I realized I was just confused. ...

I'm really sorry! I feel awful!

Almost there...

That piece made me sad, which I assume was the goal, so good job! I liked the description in this piece. The scary part is, the description made it seem, ...

That was a really cool piece! It reminds me of a piece I just read, and they are both amazing! The description was perfect, and the part where he was ...

That was a really beautiful piece! I liked how the moth and the flame can be compared to people, which is actually kind of sad. The description and the emotion ...

To me it sounds like an abusive relationship problem. Which I don't think gets enough attention. Kudos to you for that. The description was great, and I liked the emotion. ...

I like the story, but no offense, but it sounds like every other break-up story. The girl follows the guy into a room, finds out he's cheating, and runs out ...

That was really good. I loved the description in it, but I just need a little clarification. So, was he dead, or did he just, you know, move on? Just ...

That was really cool! I liked the description in your story. I've read some of your previous stories, and I know how much talent and potential you have. I could ...

Wow. I don't really know what to say about that, except wow. But I was also a little confused. So, I guess she killed him, if it wasn't just a ...

I'm sorry, but I was really confused. Was the main character a guy, or a girl? I'm guessing a guy, but I'm not really sure. But the description in this ...

That was really good. I didn't really understand what the music thing was, or what it had to do with the story, but it was really cool nonetheless. Your description ...

I was touched that she said I was the only one she trusted, considering I'd been the only one nice to her since kindergarten. But I was disappointed that Alison ...