Amfliflier

Hi! This was a little confusing, but I actually really liked it! I liked how it had a lot of mystery in it, and the description at the beginning was ...

Okay, I'm very confused right now. I think you're going to want to elaborate on this a bit more. Although the description in the fight scene was fantastic, I was ...

Hi! I really liked this. Although, I was confused with the prologue: Why wouldn't they tell her she had a twin brother? I realize it will help later in the ...

Hi! I liked the mystery in this piece. It really made me want to keep reading. Seriously though, tell me when the next part of this is coming out please! ...

Wow. This was really good and mysterious. What happens next? :) I liked the mystery of this piece, and the description in the beginning. Although, one thing that I found ...

I liked this. I liked how it had conflict, which I notice some stories are lacking. I liked the the picture too, it kind of helped get show the story ...

Hi! This was actually really good! I wasn't sure how it would be, honestly, when I saw the description. But it seemed like a very new idea, and I really ...

Hi! Okay honestly, I found this a little confusing. You said it was post-modern, but it sounds kind of old-timey to me. Also, I was confused about who Dead was. ...

Hi! Okay. You said there were going to be more parts to this, and I'm glad because I have absolutely no idea what could happen next. This was a nice ...

Hi! Okay, just to get this out of the way, I think you should keep this going. The ending doesn't really symbolize an end, exactly. Also, so far, the title ...

Hi! This was pretty good! I feel the need to say this in every review, just to make sure: So this was a story about an abusive boyfriend and his ...

Oh my gosh. This was really sad and powerful. I mean, it was amazing, but I'm on the verge of tears right now! The perspective of the little innocent girl ...

Why hello there! This was really good. I really liked how you used a prompt to help. I'm not sure why, but stories seem better if the person used a ...

You don't have to do that. I'm (hopefully) gonna have wings, so you can put me way up high in the picture, if you need more room.

This is gonna be so smazin' (sexy and amazing)! Hmm... How about I'm an Amplifier with wings and music notes comin' out of me! (Get it? Amfli flier ?) :D ...