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Re: The Soul Collector- 1
I really liked this piece. First of all, it's an entirely new concept, which I love, and also I like the mystery in here. The mystery him, how he came ...
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Re: Me Against Myself
I liked this poem. I liked how it showed conflict within the person. Also, some of the lines in there were really deep, especially the lines at the end. Anyways, ...
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Re: Dancing With Giraffes
I really like this song. It's so cheery and fun! I have a question though: Why of all animals did you choose a giraffe? I mean, they're cute and funny ...
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Re: Always stick together Chapter 1
Wow. This was really powerful. Please tell me if there's another part to this, because I want you to continue this. The description and emotion were so strong, and I ...
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Re: It's my turn
Hi! I think personally out of all of them, the second one, the Pyromania one was the poem I liked the best. I don't know if it was the shape ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: "Dead to Rights" Ch. 1
It sounds sick, I know, but for whatever reason this story made me smile. I wasn't sure if this was the goal, but I liked at the end how two ...
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Re: The YWS Ship
Haha this looks great! I'm amazed that people can draw like this! xD Not that I'm much of an artist, but I liked how cartoony it looks. It has a ...
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Re: For Rory
Oh my gosh this was amazing! :D For whatever reason, I fell in love with this piece! First of all, I love that it was dedicated to someone that died. ...
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Re: My Love for You Will Never Die
Hi! I don't really read poetry that often, but I really liked this. I don't know what it was, but this was beautiful. The emotion was perfect, and so was ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Art of Dying
Hi! I actually thought the 2nd person perspective in this was really cool, and it really set this piece apart from others. Although it made me sad at the end, ...
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Re: Get Warmer
Hi! I really liked this. It was so simple, and I loved how you based it off of a song! I don't know why, but just the simplicity of this ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: My sister's art
That was sweet of you to post these for your sister. I liked the first one, it was really cute! I think the second one was my favorite too! It ...
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Re: The Lakeside Pact
Hola! Okay, personally, I felt like I was watching a movie in fast forward. I think you should slow it down and write with more detail. Also, I think you ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: I'm visiting you mom...
This was really sad, and I'm on the verge of tears right now! This was so beautifully written, and I love the repetitiveness of the "buts". The description and emotion ...
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Re: Untitled- Prolouge
Hi! I really liked this, and I want to know what happens next! :) Although I found one grammatical error in the second paragraph: You were talking in 1st person, ...
May 1, 2011
