AmethystNight

Hello, I understand the problem you're having well. When writing my characters, I often base part of them on my friends. The trick is to allow yourself to become attatched ...

The name is likely to change; it's only temporary until I can think of something that fits better. I put my hood up and zipped up my jacket. Then I ...

Overall, I really enjoyed this piece. I like how you started it, not revealing what the boy was running from. This helped to build the tension. However, I felt that ...

Crystal Clear Chapter 1 I was born in a small village, just outside of London, to Lady Elizabeth and Lord Mathew Stratt. We lived in the largest house in the ...

Firstly, WOW! I'm hooked. I love the idea so far for this story and the characters that you're building up have already started to interest me. Also, I love their ...

I think this is a great start and, from what I've read so far, I would like to read more of this story. I think you have developed the main ...

Crystal Clear Prologue The tray landed on my desk with enough force to move the plates and bowls around and make a loud clattering sound that woke me. I jumped ...

I love the idea for this story and the way you explore the dream. You're description is brilliant, and I got a clear image of the world you were creating. ...