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Re: Secrets of the seed
A body of flawless strength, the humble Sequoia stands, poised, of faithful, innumerable years. Elegant, majestic branches rise up – naked adornment; crooked as witches’ fingers. Won’t you tell
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Hey, I'm new and would love to know more people on here:)
Hi! Welcome! We're really happy to have you here - I can't wait to start reviewing some of your work! Welcome and have fun xxx -Alia, your new YWS buddy!
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Hey, I'm new and would love to know more people on here:)
Hi! Welcome! We're really happy to have you here - I can't wait to start reviewing some of your work! Welcome and have fun xxx -Alia, your new YWS buddy!
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Soul River
Hi Bolshevik! I'm here to review for you today, and, let me just tell you, I cannot belive that nobody has commented on this yet - it's fantastic! Right, so ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Yet another newbie C:
Hi! Cute avvie! It's lovely that you've joined our community and we're REALLY happy to have you! Welcome and I'm so looking forward to reviewing some of your work! Have ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Bumblebee's Journey
Hi cammie! I just wanted to say how much I loved this poem! It was incredibly cute and just made be feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I don't really ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Dancers
This poem is truly lovely. There are a few gramatical errors I will point out a little later, but for now, let me discuss with you the content of your ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Imaginary: Part 1
Hi Roxy, here to do a quick review! This story is sweet. Your grammar and flow is great, and I love the innocence of it all. Your Matter-of-fact voice as ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Incoming newbie
Hi rach! Nice to meet you! I live in a little island off the coast of england! I can't wait to start reading and reviewing some of your pieces! Have ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Diary of Anne Frank Retold
Hi Aly! Straight in with a review here. This piece was far too casual for me and unrealistic. The 'holocaust' wasn't know as the 'holocaust' back then: mass murder was ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: [Untitled]
Hi. Here for a quick review! I must say: this is absolutely excellent. There are so many layers and dimensions to your poem: I read it again and again until ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Fragile Things
Hello, Kat! Thanks for the feedback! Right, down to business: this poem was 100% better than your first. You took all the advice the reviewers of 'cursed' extended on board ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: I will reveiw any work! (No rating limitation) (open again)
Hi! I'd really appreciate it if you could review a few parts of my novel in historical fiction called 'softness of doves'. Could you start with the prologue, please? Thank-you ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Softness of Doves
Entry III – February 19th 1949: - I apologise: yesterday’s entry was cut a little short. The boys wanted to get moving, and so we slung our cloth bags over ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Cursed
Hi kat :) Time for a review, as promised. I have to agree totally with the previous reviewer: this poem was in all honesty decent, nothing more. I felt little ...
Jun 22, 2011
