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Re: Calendar Reset
Reserving a review spot!
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas
Saving a review space ;)
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Heya Ellen! *shakes hands* - It's lovely to meet you. We welcome you with open arms! Have a great time here! And, CityOfDragons - Hi, too! You sound very talented! ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Hello Everybody :)
Hello! Welcome! It's lovely to meet you * shakes hands *. I'm Amelia, but others call me Am or Alia. Take your pick! I'm really excited about reading and reviewing ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: The Avenue Sisters- Prologue
Hello. My name is Amelia - you can call me what you like, though: I get A, Am or Alia - take your pick! I'll be revieiwing your work today! ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Math...mwahahahah
This poem is so great. I think all we Literacy-lovers on YWS can relate to this poem ( me inparticular - I scraped a C in my maths GCSE). I ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Revenge
I love it! This is fantastic - you wrote it in such a way as to make the unrealistic humerous, even, to make it realistic! I had a giggle on ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Memories of Becoming Beautiful
Hello! I know this is going to be a bit of a rubbish review, but I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. The format was ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Lost
Thank-you, Karzkin, for letting me know about your Haiku series. I really enjoyed it! At first, I read each in turn, and, feeling a little bemused, opened the spoilers. A ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: *grins shyly* Hi there...
Hello and welcome! You'll love YWS and I guarentee you'll find it addictive. Have fun! - Alia, your new YWS buddie!
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: In which "Sweet Fingers" is taught a lesson
Hi! I'm Alia, and I'll be reviewing your piece today. Nice to meet you! *shakes hands* XD Positives: 1) Your storytelling abilities are excellent. Your prose is nice and paced, ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The Desert Speaks
This is lovely! As a bellydancer myself, I can relate, though, I'm not from Arabia, as my name suggests hehe ;) You did make some gramatical errors, which the other ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: I Can Tell When I'm Not Wanted
Hello! My name is Alia, and I'm here to review today! This poem was decent. It was to-the-point and flowed well, and your grammar was impecable. I have two faults ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The Elf Child: Part 1 of Chapter 1
Alia here to review! Normally, I never browse the fantasy section, simply because I do not enjoy reading novels and stories revolving around the topic. My main reason is that ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: 32. Night
Hi! I don't really post much on pieces of art because, although I do a little drawing, I don't really know the first thing about it! Anyways, I just wanted ...
Jun 25, 2011
