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Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 1
Hiya mac. I'm so sorry: I completely forgot to review this chapter for you! Life is just so hectic! I PROMISE to do it later today and if I forget, ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: The Softness of Doves
Entry V – February 22nd 1949 I woke early this morning to be alone with Nikola. The darkness possessed a somewhat sinister aura. Shivering, I kneeled down beside a crudely ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Do your characters talk to you?
My cousins ( three boys, 11, 8, 6) love to play games. From Doctor who ( me being Amy Pond XD) to a pretend escape from an angry tribe of ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
1) between shades of grey - ruta sypetes 2) Embers - sandor marai 3) samira and Samir - ? 4) The tales of thr otori - lian hern 5) Uncle ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: The She-King
My story has exactly 150 words. Enjoy! And, for those who don't know, Hatshpsut was one of only three Woman-rulers of Egypt during the New Kingdom. I'm obsessed with Ancient ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: The girl and water Prologue
Hello. I didn't enjoy really enjoy reading this, sad to say. Why? Because it was unrelatable. I could not relate emotionally or psychologically with you MC, for her feelings are ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Prologue
That's so much better! Seriously, I don't think I've seen a writer come back with such an improved re-write of their story. You took all the advice you were given ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Prologue
Hello, Mac! I'm here as promised! Right, let's get down to a review, shall we? Okay...so, where to start... Overall-first impression I enjoyed this first chapter, Mac. I'm definately up ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Lost Children of Norway
Hello everyone. The tradgedy of the Norway Massacre inspired me (I'm a few weeks late, I know) to write this poem, in memory of the young people lost. I hope ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Um... Er... Hi :)
Hi Mac! Nice to meet you *shakes hands*! I'm Amelia, and I'm from England too...well...Britain. I live in the Isle of Man. It's just off the coast of Liverpool. What ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Hiya Lele! How's it going? I really enjoyed your poem. It's full of raw emotion. Your statements are very stark and blunt, and you put your point across very forcefully ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Salt and Light
Hiya Hayden! I'm here as promised! There is absolutely no questioning the fact that you have a gift for writing - your prose is incredibly sharp, attuned, and focused. You ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: How'd you discover YWS?
I was desperate to get my work out there. I wanted to get my stories published in a magazine, but it turned out that the prosess was alot more complicated ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: A girl with a song
Hi! I'm Amelia and I'm going to give your piece a quick review! This poem was very well-written. It contained some lovely imagery. It flowed well, and read smoothly. I ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Dark Obsession: Chapter one: COMPLETE
Hey Soulkana! I'm here to review as promised! I haven't reviewed at all lately, so I best get stared again. Let's make it an epic! Okay - this was, on ...
Jul 31, 2011
