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  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 1

    Hiya mac. I'm so sorry: I completely forgot to review this chapter for you! Life is just so hectic! I PROMISE to do it later today and if I forget, ...

    Aug 12, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: The Softness of Doves

    Entry V – February 22nd 1949 I woke early this morning to be alone with Nikola. The darkness possessed a somewhat sinister aura. Shivering, I kneeled down beside a crudely ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Do your characters talk to you?

    My cousins ( three boys, 11, 8, 6) love to play games. From Doctor who ( me being Amy Pond XD) to a pretend escape from an angry tribe of ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Media Reviews Re: What is the Best Book you have read...

    1) between shades of grey - ruta sypetes 2) Embers - sandor marai 3) samira and Samir - ? 4) The tales of thr otori - lian hern 5) Uncle ...

    Aug 9, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The She-King

    My story has exactly 150 words. Enjoy! And, for those who don't know, Hatshpsut was one of only three Woman-rulers of Egypt during the New Kingdom. I'm obsessed with Ancient ...

    Aug 7, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The girl and water Prologue

    Hello. I didn't enjoy really enjoy reading this, sad to say. Why? Because it was unrelatable. I could not relate emotionally or psychologically with you MC, for her feelings are ...

    Aug 7, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Diamond Fist: Prologue

    That's so much better! Seriously, I don't think I've seen a writer come back with such an improved re-write of their story. You took all the advice you were given ...

    Aug 7, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Diamond Fist: Prologue

    Hello, Mac! I'm here as promised! Right, let's get down to a review, shall we? Okay...so, where to start... Overall-first impression I enjoyed this first chapter, Mac. I'm definately up ...

    Aug 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Lost Children of Norway

    Hello everyone. The tradgedy of the Norway Massacre inspired me (I'm a few weeks late, I know) to write this poem, in memory of the young people lost. I hope ...

    Aug 6, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Um... Er... Hi :)

    Hi Mac! Nice to meet you *shakes hands*! I'm Amelia, and I'm from England too...well...Britain. I live in the Isle of Man. It's just off the coast of Liverpool. What ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: deleted

    Hiya Lele! How's it going? I really enjoyed your poem. It's full of raw emotion. Your statements are very stark and blunt, and you put your point across very forcefully ...

    Aug 2, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Salt and Light

    Hiya Hayden! I'm here as promised! There is absolutely no questioning the fact that you have a gift for writing - your prose is incredibly sharp, attuned, and focused. You ...

    Aug 1, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: How'd you discover YWS?

    I was desperate to get my work out there. I wanted to get my stories published in a magazine, but it turned out that the prosess was alot more complicated ...

    Aug 1, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: A girl with a song

    Hi! I'm Amelia and I'm going to give your piece a quick review! This poem was very well-written. It contained some lovely imagery. It flowed well, and read smoothly. I ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dark Obsession: Chapter one: COMPLETE

    Hey Soulkana! I'm here to review as promised! I haven't reviewed at all lately, so I best get stared again. Let's make it an epic! Okay - this was, on ...

    Jul 31, 2011


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