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Re: Calypso
Hiya! I'm here, at last, for a review! I wanted to review this so badly because I'm quite familiar with the myth of the nymph Calypso. I love history, especially ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: When the Lights go out
Hiya Bell! I can call you that, right? Because it's quite cute! Anyway, onto a review! This piece was really, really good. The opening few sentences were a little obscure, ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: Calypso
Saving a review spot!
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: Serpent's Teeth [1]
Hi Twit; it's so nice to be able to review something of yours! I'm not sure if we've "met" before now so, Hello, I'm Amelia. Do you have a name, ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Broken Jar
Hello, Hayden! Finally, I get to a review! Ok, so let's get started... Hayden, you don't need me to tell you that you're a brilliant writer: for heck's sake - ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Broken Jar
I have to go and make our dinner now, but I'll review tommorow night, promise!
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: Rahab
Hiya Lumi! All I have to say is just wow! I really loved your story; I guess Joshua's competetion got us all into flashfiction! I'd normally start with critiques and ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: The Lion
Hiya - I'm here as requested! Okay, so, this was...alright. I know you asked for the 'thous' and 'arts' not to be critiqued, but I have to say that I'm ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Let's Run
Hi! Have you got a first name? ( obviously ) I'm Amelia - nice to meet you! * shakes hands *! I don't think I've ever reviewed a piece of ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Softness of Doves
Entry VI – February 23rd 1949 Last night, I dreamt of the camp. All the memories I had tried to erase had coerced themselves into my subconscious. The most frustrating ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Nonchalant
Hello everyone.There's a long line of artists in my family, and I seemingly have inherited the gene. I've always liked drawing, but kind of got bored of it. I've been ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Hi there :)
Hiya fred! Pup (fireheartedkaratepup) gave you a great introduction! Anyway, nice to meet you! Do you have any other hobbies\interests besides writing? I love cooking and I'm a total mummy ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
Hello! Onto a review...It's my first in a while! Ok, so, my overall first impression...This was dull. Bland, uninspiring, and dull. I don't mean to sound too harsh, but I ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 2
Hiya, Mac; I'm here as promised! Let's get to down to a review, eh? Okay, so, this was good. You've posted a well-written, well-presented chapter which builds intruige and leads ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 1
Hiya! After reading both passages, I thought I'd better review the second. It was really good. Like a few of the other reviewers pointed out, It was very speech-based, and ...
Aug 13, 2011
