AmeliaCogin

Hi there! I really enjoyed this piece. It's very lovely and innocent and I get a very fairytaleish vibe from it. I have to say, I didn't really have any ...

Hi guys! I've been working on this for a while, please please please review! Be as harsh as you like! lol :) Lara slipped her schoolbag from her aching shoulder, ...

Hi, I've nothing left to say - jenthura did a brill review! I really enjoyed this piece. It was a really good read but you made quite a few gramatical ...

Hi! I enjoyed reading your story, and by "1" I presume you mean there's another? I'd love to read it if there is! Keep writing! I like your piece because ...

Hi! I really enjoyed your story. It was quite imaginative and descriptive. I loved the beginning - very mysterious. I also loved the blunt way to informed the reader of ...

Hi! I enjoyed this piece. I really got engrossed in the story and in the character of Alyssandra. Your writing is very descriptive and I felt the different parts of ...

Hi, I loved this piece. It was very stirring and emotive. I thought the last three stanza's were great, but the first could use some tweeking. For me, it didn't ...

Hi. I really loved the basic idea of this piece. It's got good substance, but could be structured a lot better. The first thing I noted about this poem: - ...

This poem means a lot to me: I was physically crying when writing this earlier. I hope that you enjoy it. Please give me your thoughts and feel free to ...

Hi, this was short and sweet, quite charming too. A few of the sentences need to be rewritten just to make the piece flow a little bit more smoothly. Thanks! ...

Hi, this was short and sweet, quite charming too. A few of the sentences need to be rewritten just to make the piece flow a little bit more smoothly. Thanks! ...

Hi, this was short and sweet, quite charming too. A few of the sentences need to be rewritten just to make the piece flow a little bit more smoothly. Thanks! ...

Hi, this was short and sweet, quite charming too. A few of the sentences need to be rewritten just to make the piece flow a little bit more smoothly. Thanks! ...

Hi! I loved this story. Very emotive. No obvious mistakes, but in parts I felt that the sentences could have been constructed a little better. Other than that this was ...

Hi, I haven't got much else to say other than I really liked this and I thought it was great. A job well done. Thanks, keep up the good work! ...