AmeliaCogin

Hi! I LOVED this poem! so beautiful! It remined me of beauty and the beast with the rose petal ect. lol - you've brought the kid who loved disney back ...

Hi! First off: I really enjoyed this piece! I have to say, it was a little disjointed in some parts and many sentences seemed to go on forever, but strangely, ...

Hi! Just a quick review! I have to say, first of all, that I am NOT a fan of rhyming poetry. But that's just me lol. I do have to ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this piece. To me, it seemed more a poem than a song. Really well done! Your style is simplistic yet at the same time beautiful. Here's ...

Hi! first of all, I really loved this poem! I loved the innocence and the simplicity of the piece. Here's a nitpick! lol:) Some times ( put them together - ...

Hi, I'd really appreciate your thoughts! :) *** Her tone monotonous, She relates the events Of an uninteresting Saturday I nod politely: Occasionally laugh; Pretend I am actually listening My ...

Hello! First of all welcome to Young writers society! Enjoy yourself, do plenty of reviews, and have fun! I presume this is your first piece so I'll go easy on ...

Hi! I really loved this poem! Very simple yet stunning. I think perhaps you could've used more punctuation: commas and colons, namely. I really liked the whole theme of the ...

Hi! I'd like to tell you first off that I really enjoyed your piece. Aziraphale is very critical: he's given me a bad review too. DO NOT LET HIM STOP ...

Hi! thanks so much for your comments! This is quite a difficult subject for me and to have such good reviews for a poem expressing my emotions was so great!Thanks ...

Hi. I liked your poem very much. To be honest, I didn't really understand the purpose of the poem: the meaning behind it ect. I didn't really find any mistakes ...

I wrote this poem last night...I've given an explanation at the bottom as to what it's about but see if you can guess whilst reading. Thanks!:) I pierce my reflection ...

Oh WOW! I loved this so much! I had tears in my eyes! your writing drew me in and I was jsut transfixed. I think you may want to edit ...

Thank-you for your opinions, everyone. I'm quite proud of this piece, and I'm sorry Aziraphale if that's the way you felt. I agree with the others that it needs rounding ...

Hi! I think that this is a nice piece, not entirely original, but still decent. The line arrangement confused my a little. Im - use an apostrophe or preferably write ...