AmeliaCogin

Hi! Just a quick review! I loved this poem. You use some beautiful adjectives and compelling images. Lovely! No gramatical or spelling errors to speak of. Pretty perfect! I have ...

Hi! First of all, WELCOME! Hope you love it here! I'll be reviewing you work. OK, so: I really, really loved this poem. It was deep, soulful, dramtic, very compelling ...

Hi! I'll be doing a quick review of your poem! First of all, I really did like it. It was soulful and well-written, though I do feel you over-prosed a ...

Hi! Just a quick review! I really liked this piece! I may have time for a proper review later! Right now, I thought 'screams of thunder' was very, very good. ...

Hi! I really loved this poem. It was uncomprehendingly hypnotic. I didn't really care that half the time I had no idea what you were taking about. lol. It was ...

Hi! I really enjoyed your poem. I like the concept of the poem, although I tend to use the expression 'one of those days' when something bad's happened - for ...

Hi! Just a really quick review! I liked your poem. It was quirky and humourous and whitty and coy. I've exhausted all the descriptive words I can muster regarding this ...

Hi! First of all, I like your story. I agree with everything dreamwalker said - you have made many gramatical errors and you often repeat the same words in one ...

I hope you like my latest creation! I welcome constructive critisism, as always! Thanks :) AC ‘Who are you?’ She asks Perfectly seriously I stare, taken aback; My lower lip ...

Hello! I liked this poem. It's very deep, and I had to read it a few times to take it all in. I loved just how poetic it was. Not ...

HI, well, I wasn't sure whether to write more - do you think I need to? I kind of liked it short and sweet. Please let me know what you ...

Previously titled: 'he liked to hit me there.' Thanks everyone who's reviewed I am so grateful and soooo happy to get it featured. You'll be happy to know ( i ...

Hi! I like your poem alot! Soulful, In one word. Here's a nitpick! lol Dark Raven In the Darkness, - you've already described the raven as dark - don't say ...

Go for it! If you're eager, can you please review some of my work? Just go to my profile and portfolio and pick one! Thanks alot! I love scavenging for ...

Hi icyflame you are totally right!