AmeliaCogin

Hi! The title drew me to this poem...One word: EPIC. How the heck can you have so much patience??? Well, your patience paid off. This piece of work is excellent. ...

Oh Goodness! This was beautiful from beggining to end - impecable grammar and wonderful storyline. I love it! Absolutely adore it! PLease, please, please, write more! It'd be excellent to ...

Hello! I'm Amelia and welcome to Young writers society! I enjoyed reading your piece. It was somewhat a stange concept, the devil and jesus thing, but it worked well. Perhaps ...

Hi, sorry for the small review! A bit pushed for time! I loved this poem. It's clearly been very well thought out - I can tell alot of time and ...

Hello. I agree with soulkana: this is very, very good. At first I thought, horrified, no capitals or spaces or real punctuation! But it worked. It just unexplicably worked. Great ...

Hi! WELCOME! Hope you have fun here! First of all: title: good, intruging. I like it. It drew me to your piece. I liked how you developed Bello's character: his ...

Hello! I've followed you! To the poem: It was lovely. But: I felt it started off brilliantly, yet hit the rocks half way through and kind of got a bit ...

Hi jessa! I like your work. If you wanted to, you could call it a piece of prose, which is kind of a cross between a story and a poem. ...

Hi! Great poem! I really liked the message therein and the final stanza was my favorite. Here's a quick nitpick Imagine yourself here, As a raw piece of clay, Just ...

Sorry for the pithy review - a bit pushed for time -got so much revision to get done! Well, good grief! This was fantastic! I loved it! It was so ...

Hi! I'm not going to go into any great detail because Dianne and pinkshearwater have done great, thorough reviews! This was brilliant. I really, really did enjoy this and I ...

Hi everyone! I was inspired by poetry revision for my English exam ( who'd of thought, eh? lol) to write a poem with very little punctuation. I think it's called ...

Hello! This poem was very good. I can totally relate to fact, I think alot of teenage girls can. It's intense yet very rhythmic and moving. Brilliant work. A *like* ...

Hello! This poem is lovely! Very simplistic and beautiful! I love the whole innocence of the piece. I really connected with the poem. There was few gramatical mistakes. Here's a ...

Hi! I've havent got much time today but I'll try and post a proper review later and help you with an ending. For now, This was great! the sentences were ...