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Re: Make Believe
Hello! Very well done. I'm becoming a fan of your work! Keep it up! I loved the concept and your poem is very well written, though I would say words ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Flutter By
Hello! Erm...yes, I like this. I got the message. Many of your descriptions are lovely. However, it needs a bit of work:) I don’t know how to say this, my ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: Wanderer in the sea of fog
Hello! Sorry for the short review! I love this so much. Your writing is so beautiful! One thing I would say it looked a bit crammed in one paragraph - ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: Cultural differences
Hi! I'll start off by saying that your grammar is fine. No mistakes I can see in that department. However, it packed no punch. I like poetry that really effects ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: Sunday Evening
Hi! I loved this very much. I'm into modern poetry, and I love the quirkinessof your piece. It was original and very cool. I love dthe descriptions you used and ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Used To
Oh wow. This was beautiful, so meaningful, I could really feel the emotion pouring out of your words. I'd be interested to know where the inspiration for this poem came ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Still and Forever
Hi! I love your poem - very descriptive and very well written! Here's a nitpick: And the eagles still cry And fly so high; And the lovebirds still sing As ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Once More
Hi upile! THanks for uploading such a great poem. It was so beautiful and it was the kind of poem that you simply can't fault was deep and rich and ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Mailboxes and Hesitation
Hello! Just a quick review. I loved this piece very, very much. As others have already commented, it is very reflective and I love that about this story. You get ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Girl in the Room (Updated)
Hi. I love this poem very much. You made use of very simplistic yet beautiful language. I like the mystery surrounding the poem...immediately the read asks so many questions regarding ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Dear Sweet Listener chapter 1
Hi guys, this is the first chapter of my novel in progress. Tell me what you think, if you will, because if it's rubbish I need to know now so ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Do you? Are you? Can you?
Hello! Well I did enjoy this...I loved how apt it this day and age parents can pressure us in ways sometimes we don't like. I thought you showed that fact ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Park Bench!
Oh wow: this is lovely! Seriously, wow. You've taken a totally boring subject and turned it into sometiming beautiful and interesting. My fave stanza with this one ( so creative ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Blue Boy
Hi! Let's get straight to the review. To answer your question, no, I'm not inclined to read on, very sadly. I'm sure your storyline is good and it gets better ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Gaze
OH wow! This is so beautiful! Well done! I loved every moment of it and your grammar was perfect. No flaws so I can see! Every girl has felt this ...
Apr 16, 2011
