AmeliaCogin

Hi! Aww...poor you, no reviews! Never fear...OK, so, yes this looked 'real cool'. I had no idea what you were going on about, quite frankly. I guess it's just one ...

Hi! Straight to the review...Meh...all I'll say is the potential is there. Right now, you've over-described, haven't used enough punctuation, and keep switching tenses. When I try to read it ...

Hello! I really loved this poem. It was subtle yet at the same time vivid. I normally dislike rhyming poetry, but it is totally your thing. The rhymes you used ...

Hello sageleaf! Just a quick review. I really liked this poem. I've short and simple and sweet. The only critisism I have is the 'sometimes' you write at the end ...

Hello! You reviewed my piece so now I will do the same for you! Ok, so I liked this story a lot. I hope you're going to write another part. ...

Hello! First of all, welcome to YWS! Have fun here. Btw I love your username. Anyways, onto the review. I really liked this. It was a little weak in the ...

Hi guys, well here it is. And, it does get very mysterious at the end. But, don't worry, all your questions will be answered in the third part of this ...

Hello! First of all, I really did enjoy this poem. It flowed beautifully, and I loved the bluntness and description you used in your piece. Gramatically, you were spot on. ...

Hello! Masquerade covered all the flaws I was going to draw to your attention, so I won't nitpick...I really enjoyed this poem. It was simplistic yet lovely, and some of ...

Hello! I really liked your poem. Sometimes when poems are simple they can be emotionless and uninteresting, but your's was totally the opposite. It was simplistic yet quite lovely. Here's ...

Hello! First of all, I liked your poem. That's just it. I liked it: your words didn't move me to love it. It had a gentle, methodical flow, and your ...

Hello! First of all * like*! This was certainly...unusual. Perhpas better described unique. I loved the fact that I had no idea what you were talking about but it was ...

Hello. First of all, welcome to YWS! I'm sorry, I really didn't like this at all. The punctuation was awful, all over the place. The storyline was rather corny and ...

Hello! This poem is quite lovely... I suppose, though, it's something and nothing: a topic many have covered. But it's nice. No gramatical errors. However, I felt no spark when ...

Hi! I really loved this poem. The first stanza was my favorite - the flow was lovely. Here's just a small nitpick:) I am a masterpiece. But not everyone will ...