AmeliaCogin

Hi! First of all, loved this title. Very intruging. I liked the wording of your poem and the description therein. The flow was nice and paced. Gramatically though, there were ...

Hi! first of all, welcome to YWS! If you need anything at all, don't hesitate to PM me with a question or two! This poem was...unusual. I liked it. The ...

Hi! I agree totally with thescratchman: this is a brill first poem. However, I do understand how apathy can be monotomous, if a little more discouraging. You definately need some ...

Hi everyone! I really would like a few reviews on this. Thanks! :) The path of the daffodils Runs hushed; Take me there, my lover We’ll dance beside The swaying ...

Hi! I'm not stalking you, honestly. I'm just reviewing things with no comments! I liked this piece. It was short, simplistic, and dramatic. No gramatical errors I can spy, so ...

Hello! First of all, I loved this piece. It was a beautiful concept and very well executed. The flow was nice and paced and you poem has a lovely rhythm. ...

Hello! A review as requested...Ummm, ok, so lyrics aren't my thing, but I'm going to have a go :) You've got a good beat going on here. I'm going to ...

Hello! I did enjoy this story. It was emotive, though only to a certain extent. You see, you told us what happened. You didn't show us or give an example. ...

Hello! In advance, sorry for the rubbish review. I really did like your piece. It was extremely moving and searingly well written. I couldn't really see any gramatical mistakes other ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! Have fun and keep posting work! I'll be blunt: for me, this poem was a little bland. No spark erupted when I read your piece ( ...

Hello lily! Here to do a quick review! I liked this poem: the message it projected ect. I don't really know if the title is gramatically accurate. Shouldn't it be ...

Hi Hayden! Glad to see you've posted another work. Gramatically, this is pretty much impecable. I really can't fault you. Your descriptions and literary devices very brilliant and well-thought-out. Th

Hi Jess! Here to review! I really liked this story. I liked the format and the title was intruging. Here's a nitpick :) I surface, panting and heaving ( 'gasping' ...

This poem is full of imagery: the title is the only clue you're getting - It's short but deep! Please take time to read and review! :) Go on: Drop ...

Hello! I've never reviewed any lyrics before - it's not my forte! This piece is my first! OK, so, where do I start...I relate to Princess when she said that ...