-
Re: Just because I didn't cry for you
Hey gracie. Nice poem you have here. I do feel meaning behind the words, even though in some parts the poem was a little weak. I dont really see any ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: To my Demon
Hey jess here to review as promised. I like this piece, though I could tell from the first stanza you were pushing out of writers block, for the words seemed ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Bullets of Peace
Please give this a quick read and if you'd be kind enough please review and LIKE if you like it! Thank-you! :) ‘Isn’t she marvellous?’ ‘A work of art...’ ‘Are ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: A Deadly Promise
Hello! This poem is very interesting. I'd love to know the meaning behind the words. ( PM me if you fancy) I liked some of the imagery used, and the ...
May 13, 2011 -
Re: Between Shades of Gray
It is very rare to find a book which occupies your thoughs all day, every day. A book which is so captivating, it transports you, takes you on a journey, ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Mi sol, mi sol
Hi: I liked this poem. It was sweet. I didn't have to rely on the spoiler, and since my spanish is pretty basic, that's probably a bad thing. That's just ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Rage
Hey! I really liked this poem. It was sharp and quirky and very dramatic. I liked the essence and the theme of the poem, though I do think this particular ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Simple Sixteen
Hi! I really liked this piece. I loved the whole from baby to 16-year-old thing. Very imaginaive and sweet. However, some of your descriptions were awkward and a like cringe-worthy. ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Crucifixion
Hello! Just dropped by for a quick review. I really liked this piece. It flowed smoothly and you used some pretty powerful imagery. However, sadly your spelling and grammer brought ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Pain
Hi Jill! I have to begin by saying I didn't like this at all. It didn't flow and some of the rhymes used were cringy - sorry for the harsh ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: You are beautiful
Hi! For me, this is like a cross between christina and bruno....but I believe you if you said it didn't have an influence on your writing. I liked this poem. ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Tainted
Hello! Well, I do like this poem. Your vocab was excellent and the poem flowed nicely. I liked the layout and your grammar was fine. I don't personally get it ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Coffee
Hi! From one fellow coffee addict to another, I loved this poem. You've put how great coffee really is for the world to see in an excellently-worded and pretty much ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Grandparents House
Hey new memeber! Welcome! First of all, I really liked this piece. The concept was lovely and it was well executed. Erm..I think your title needs re-spelling: grandpants? Grandparents. Yanni ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Wyvern (EDIT)
Here to review as requested! OK, so first off, I'll say that your story telling skills are excellent. The piece flowed smoothly and your description, especially of the wyvern, was ...
May 5, 2011
