AmeliaCogin

Here as promised! Overall, this poem was strong. Granted, a few cringe-worthy rhymes have been shoved in there, but on the whole this was a well-executed poem with lovely rhythm. ...

Hi! Back as promised! OK, so my thoughts and corrections are in the bold print: i. our crepe paper lungs were failing already, big breaths bottled into our grey stomachs ...

Hello perse! I havent time for a full review now (expect one soon) but I just wanted to drop you a line and tell you how amazing I thought this ...

Hello! Just a quick review! I'm not going to comment on grammar and punctuation and what-not, becuase a few other reviewers have already done so. This piece was decent. But ...

Hi everyone! Let me say that I always write with personal experiences in mind and so I hope to convey emotion through my pieces. Please let me know If I'm ...

Hi Jess! Nice to see a new poem! How do you make time for it all - writing, wedding planning, school?!!! Anyways, very accomplished poem. I agree with snoink that ...

Hey! I can see you're new here so pleasentries first! I'm Amelia! It's great to be able to review your work today. I must say that your word-choice, grammar, and ...

Hello! Just a quick review! I liked this poem. The message was very clear and presented well, and your use of language was excellent. I agree with everything said in ...

Well...I just love your poetry, inkwell. It's never bland or boring and there is always some deep, crypic message ready to be burrowed from the mind-boggling expolsion of huge complicated ...

Hello! I'm Amelia. I don't believe I have ever reviewed your work before so here goes. I wont go into any detail reiterating what the other reviewers have said about ...

Hello! I must say ive never reviewed one of your poems before and I am impressed. I do feel that this poem has great potential, for it is clear that ...

Here to repay the favour! How has this got so many views yet only one review? This was fantastic! I adored reading it. It was paced and flowed well. Your ...

Hey spook. I liked this piece. The flow was a little dodgy though and the poem was a little disjointed in places. I didnt really 'get' what was going on. ...

Hello! I really like this. It flows nicely and has an air of mystery. Just a few nitpicks :) In the mirror I see, damage of my scam - I ...

Awww! This was so sweet! You've done really well here. However, I think the poem started strong yet weakened toward the end. Aswell, you seemed to abuse punctuation, flinging it ...