AmeliaCogin

Hi! I liked this poem. The sentence length, however, was a little bit mish-mashed. You maintain a good flow, though. I like the Idea of no capitilisation, but you need ...

Aww! I love this poem! I find that most rhyming poetry tends to be clumpy and disjointed and corny...however this one was flowed beautifully! I have only one nitpick...;) Never ...

Hi everyone! I've had writers block recently, and last night, suddenly, I was just flooded with inspiration - yay! Unforntuately, Random and perhaps weird ideas popped into my head. Here's ...

Hi! Just wanted to tell you how sweet I thought this piece to be. You were so creative then, and, of course, now. I remember now I wrote a story ...

Hello! Ok, so let's get started * cracks knuckles* - only joking...Right. I liked this piece. It was simple yet conveyed a message. On a scale of one to ten, ...

Hello! I'm here to repay the favour! Ok, so, first impressions: this was a decent, simple piece. The title is cliched, so you may want to change it and think ...

I have to say, this is definately pushing the boundies on modern poetry. I have to be honest: it wasn't my cup of tea. It was random, hard to keep ...

Hello! I *liked* this poem a few days ago because I read it, loved it, and unfortunately couldn't be bothered to nitpick it all ( it is a bit of ...

Hi! Ok, so I clicked on this piece because the title really intruiged me. I had no idea where it was going. And I still don't. I don't know how ...

Hi! I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this. I had no idea what you were going on about, mind, but I felt passion and emotion ...

Hey! I dont think ive ever posted a comment in the art section, and I came across these and just wanted to let you know how fantastic they were! I ...

Hey! I liked this story, though I thought your voice was a little flat. Aswell, you told instead of showed, and such technique can make the piece a little pedestrian, ...

When poems have very few lines, in my experience, it means that they are either deep and ponderous and philosopical, or 'shallow' - so to speak - empty, and just ...

Hey, just a quick line to say how much I enjoyed this poem. I like how've you've taken a lame prediction and used it to create a piece of writing. ...

Hey! I presume you're new here so WELCOME! If you need anything, don't hesitate to PM me or leave a comment on my wall. I just wanted to drop you ...