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AmeliaCogin

  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Long Strides

    Hi! Nice to meet you ( so to speak)...WELCOME to YWS! I liked this so much I'm making a B-line for the * like * and * follow * buttons. ...

    Jun 8, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Favorite poets...?

    Hi! My favorite Poet is called Imatiz Dhaker. My favorite poems of hers is This Room . She's such a wonderful poet! I discovered her when revising for my GCSE ...

    Jun 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Puzzle piece

    Hi! This was, well, interesting. For me, it startrd off fab and then slowly went downhill. I didn't like the last didn't seem to fit with the rest of the ...

    Jun 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Summer

    Hi! Thank-you for the last review you did of my prologue. Much appreciated! Now, down to business: I liked this. Often, I think Haiku's are a little lacking in emotion, ...

    Jun 7, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: How To Shuffle

    Wow! I think that's the hardest theme the generator has ever come up with! All I can say is you did it justice to the degree you could. It was ...

    Jun 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Bitterly-sweet

    You craftily arouse my emotions To stir a vivid spectacle; advance a Mirage, make it blossom within the Blackest, most sinful depths of my mind; You delve me into realms ...

    Jun 6, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Fever Dream

    Hi! I'm here to repay the favour! I have to say that I liked this very much. I can tell that it's been very well thought out...you've worked really hard ...

    Jun 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Metaphor

    Hi! I loved this. Nitpicks: Read cover to cover To see what lays inside - ; - normally, I'm partial to no punctuation in poems, but I do think you ...

    Jun 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Stooge

    Hi! Firstly, let me start off by saying that I really liked this poem. Your grammar was fine, but structure and layout was lacking. The huge sentences are too much ...

    Jun 6, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: Softness of Doves

    Hello everyone...I'm working on a new novel, and have just written a prologue. I expect it will intrigue you, but I just want to know if it got you hooked ...

    Jun 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Imperceptible

    Hi everyone! I'd love your thoughts on this! Be as harsh as possible and feel free to PM me if you have any further questions ect. Spherical in form – ...

    Jun 3, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Playground

    Hi, I really enjoyed this. It was one of those poems that I didnt really understand but made me feel so lovely and happy inside. I liked the layout and ...

    Jun 3, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Can you review???

    Hi victoria! I liked this story. However, I do have a few nitpicks! Firstly, the opening line: it's quite unrealistic for a mother and daughter to be starting a new ...

    Jun 3, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: the wait.

    This was quirky, and I kind of liked that. It had an an air of mystery, but the imagery was such that it wasn't too unfathomable. The top reviewer has ...

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Night-Eyes

    Hi perse! Well, another excellent poem. It really did make me feel sleepy...whether it was intentional or not, it was brilliant! I'm always so jealous when I read your poetry, ...

    Jun 2, 2011


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