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Re: Long Strides
Hi! Nice to meet you ( so to speak)...WELCOME to YWS! I liked this so much I'm making a B-line for the * like * and * follow * buttons. ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Favorite poets...?
Hi! My favorite Poet is called Imatiz Dhaker. My favorite poems of hers is This Room . She's such a wonderful poet! I discovered her when revising for my GCSE ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Puzzle piece
Hi! This was, well, interesting. For me, it startrd off fab and then slowly went downhill. I didn't like the last didn't seem to fit with the rest of the ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Summer
Hi! Thank-you for the last review you did of my prologue. Much appreciated! Now, down to business: I liked this. Often, I think Haiku's are a little lacking in emotion, ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: How To Shuffle
Wow! I think that's the hardest theme the generator has ever come up with! All I can say is you did it justice to the degree you could. It was ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: Bitterly-sweet
You craftily arouse my emotions To stir a vivid spectacle; advance a Mirage, make it blossom within the Blackest, most sinful depths of my mind; You delve me into realms ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: Fever Dream
Hi! I'm here to repay the favour! I have to say that I liked this very much. I can tell that it's been very well thought out...you've worked really hard ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: My Metaphor
Hi! I loved this. Nitpicks: Read cover to cover To see what lays inside - ; - normally, I'm partial to no punctuation in poems, but I do think you ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: Stooge
Hi! Firstly, let me start off by saying that I really liked this poem. Your grammar was fine, but structure and layout was lacking. The huge sentences are too much ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: Softness of Doves
Hello everyone...I'm working on a new novel, and have just written a prologue. I expect it will intrigue you, but I just want to know if it got you hooked ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Imperceptible
Hi everyone! I'd love your thoughts on this! Be as harsh as possible and feel free to PM me if you have any further questions ect. Spherical in form – ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Playground
Hi, I really enjoyed this. It was one of those poems that I didnt really understand but made me feel so lovely and happy inside. I liked the layout and ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Can you review???
Hi victoria! I liked this story. However, I do have a few nitpicks! Firstly, the opening line: it's quite unrealistic for a mother and daughter to be starting a new ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: the wait.
This was quirky, and I kind of liked that. It had an an air of mystery, but the imagery was such that it wasn't too unfathomable. The top reviewer has ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Night-Eyes
Hi perse! Well, another excellent poem. It really did make me feel sleepy...whether it was intentional or not, it was brilliant! I'm always so jealous when I read your poetry, ...
Jun 2, 2011
