AmeliaCogin

Entry II – February 18th 1949: - The last twenty-four hours have been exhausting. The sun, in all its radiance, began casting its rays at five o’ clock yesterday morning. ...

Back again. I really liked this, Polly. Nice prose, but in some places I felt that it was a little repetetive and awkward. Nitpick time! :) It’s easier to run. ...

I'm LIKING in advance and saving myself a review spot! A full nitpick coming your way soon!

Absolutely beautiful. You prose was controlled, though at times was a little too flowery. I loved how you told the story, and and made it so meaningful and emotive. Great ...

Hello. Nice to meet you! I'm Alia. I haven't reviewed anything of your's before and I'm quite looking forward to it! I liked this poem. I get a sort of ...

Hello again. Very nice. Very, very nice. The tone is controlled, and your storytelling is gentle and not at all over-prosed. The only problems I had with this piece were ...

Hello. Review time! Alright, so, I'm not questioning whether or not this poem was from the heart: I could tell that it was sincere. However, and please don't think me ...

Hi! Firstly, let me tell you how much I loved this. I haven't any nitpicks because this was just perfect. The rhythm is beautiful, the issue exposed in a raw ...

Hi! This is a job well done. It makes a change to hear doom and gloom in a poem than the usual stuff, and I like it. On the whole, ...

Hi! This is Entry 1 of Gretal ( my characters') autobiography. I haven't thought of a name yet. I wanted to write this historical novel in a totally different way: ...

Hello! First of all, I love your avatar! It's so pretty! I must say, I love this. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. The whole punctuation thing: not at all an issue. Actually, ...

Hi jen! Thanks for your post on my wall, and i'm here to review as requested. I haven't got the time to read and nitpick the whole thing, so, for ...

Hi! This poem is truly beautiful. It flowed brilliantly: you should be very proud of this work! In the way of nitpicks the other reviewers have already covered most of ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this poem. I can hear this confusion and frustration in your voice. You did a great job at portaying emotion. I loved how you sort-of rambled ...

Hi! This poem was upbeat and fun. I percieve that you have a keen love of dance, otherwise you wouldn't have written this poem. Unfortunately, I didn't feel any passion ...