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Hi Roxy! I'm here to review, as promised! ;) Let me begin by saying that this was very sweet. Almost a little too fairytale sweet. The happenings of your story ...

Hi roxy! You'll love it here at young writers! Welcome and have a good time. I look forward to reviewing some of your work! If you need anything don't hesitate ...

Right...here goes...I have no idea what you're talking about, but it sounds great! I'm quite ashamed at how way-off i'm going to be, but, going by the title, does this ...

Hello everyone! I wrote this quite quickly, so it needs a good nitpick. And, It's a fictional narrative ;) first part pending ;) *** A peachy moon, two delicate arches ...

Back again...Where were we? ;) She took out 5 pieces of cloth and 2 plastic cups. Whoa - this paragraph is Far too specific. You really don't need to record ...

Hello Jess! I really liked this poem. Your prose was very controlled: you did didn't condemn; you almost sympathised, which I percieve was your intention. I feel the sorrow, pity, ...

Hello Pixie! I'll just be reviewing the first chapter of your novel today, as I haven't so much time this evening! I promise that I will read and review chapter ...

Hello. I'm Alia and I'll be reviewing for you today. Normally, I hate rhyming poetry. I find that the writers often forsake emotion and passion because they are so caught ...

Reviews are really appreciated! This is my attempt at a Haiku, and I think I've probably done it wrong. I've tried to make the underlying message as deep as possible. ...

Hi. I haven't any nitpicks; I just wanted to let you know how brilliant this was. The issue of rape was exposed in a brutal yet sorrowful way. Your prose ...

Hi K. Thanks for your comment on my wall...I will write a Haiku one day... Anyway. I can't even say this was an interesting 'read': there was nothing to 'read'. ...

Hi Polly. I liked this part. Your prose was methodical, blunt, and objective. On the downside, I'm not a fan of books in which the storyline centers around ghosts and ...

Hi jess! Please don't forget about us here at young writers! Only joking - I'm so happy for you! I thought this poem was so beautiful. I feel your passion ...

Hi K, this page really was helpful. I've been wanting to attempt a Haiku for some time now, but wasn't sure how to go about it. Thanks for posting!

Hi! This was sweet. I liked your voice: I found this strength as well vulnerability. You've really captured how daunting it is, but put in perspective how, in the grand ...