Amberla93

I like this, though I do have a suggestion. Even today when I listen to those songsit brings in old memories along. I think it would flow a bit better ...

Ello, I liked this... It can be related to many people's relationships. Not just the classic tale of Romeo and Juliet. :) Good job, keep writing :)

Wow... that's really cool, she looks so sad. But, considering the name, I guess she's supposed to. :)

What? No... I want to read the rest of it! You shold post it as soon as possible, this was very interesting! Please, please post the rest of ot sono!!

Thanks so much! All of you! The reviews mean alot to me!!

Ok first, let me say that as a girl, I would LOVE for someone to write me a poem, so thumbs up there! :) And this is very sweet. I ...

Hard times come and hard times go, even when we don’t let it show. Our faith in each other, friends and family alike, often fades, put out like a light. ...

I liked this alot, just because I love the rain! :) I do hve a couple nit picks for you.. sorry. Rain drops fall outside my open window , their ...

I LOVED this! So much emotion in it! And it's so very sweet! Bravo! Haha :D

Thanks so much for the reveiws, even when I may not have time to edit, I still read every one of them and I can use all the help I ...

Thank you both! This was one of the first poems I had ever done. It is my favorite I do believe.

Thanks so much for the reviews! They helped alot! Yes, the insperation came from the Bible verse, but it also came from experience. Like the protaganist, I have been completly ...

Thanks so much!

The girl sat in silence, staring at the rain. She was afraid, if she was not careful, that her tears would soon start to fall as fast, and as hard ...

At first I thought this was the same girl as the first chapter, so I was a bit confused. But just so you know, I am loving this and cannot ...