Amberla93

I loves it!! Please post part two!! :D

Thank you both so much! I was writing this so quickly, I didn't even notice te errors. Thank you for pointing them out. :)

You were always there in the background hiding; I look back now and see you smiling. I don’t how I didn’t see it before. No, I don’t know how I ...

Hi, I very much think you should continue writing this. I've only read a couple of your pieces but you seem very talented. Personaly you captured my intrest quickly. I ...

Hi! So, um, you should finish this! What you have of it made me smile, but then it ended. :( Haha please finish it soon and let me know when ...

Ello :) I rather enjoyed this. It made me think. I agree with IcyFlame, I would replace the numbers with words. It would flow better with the style of the ...

Thank you so much! Both of you! :D

We are not defined by the color of our skin or hair, nor should we be judged on the clothes we choose to wear. Everyone is different, born in different ...

First off, let me say I loved the message in this, but I do have a few nitpicks for you. I am lonely , dont feel loved . There ' ...

You can really feel the emotion in this poem. I love poems like that, and this one is just great! I'm sure there are plently pf people who caan relate ...

This was beautiful, I loved it. You did a great job! I loved the old english, made the poem more unique. I have no nitpicks for you, I loved it ...

I loved this, I really did. So many people have been hurt like this.. most readers will be able to relate. One thing I suggest though is making sure all ...

I really don't see any thing wrong with this. Aside from missing punctuation in some places... It has a nice rhythm and flow to it, and it was easy to ...

You think the end is near... because nothing's ever clear.. anymore. And everything changes, you sit and watch, as your whole life... rearranges. You think that you'll never make it ...

I'd love to know exactly what happened.. what do they hate her for? What made everything change? This was very interesting.. but still, I'd love to know exactly what happened. ...