Amberla93

Awww, so very sweet! I loved it! Like you, I am a rhyming person, I've never liked anything of my own in this style. However, this is just grand :)

The sight of you, made my knees go weak, and I wondered if you still cared. The sight of you, made miss all the things we shared. The sight of ...

This is amazing, you have one grand sense of humor in my opinion! My favorite lines would have to be: #8 People who don't die at all and won't tell ...

Hello there, First of all let me say, I like this because it is different. Most poems are sad, lonley, full of anger, or all of those in one. (Including ...

We sit and talk about our lives, sometimes we wonder why we try. You say you’ve reached your limit. Well hon, I’ve reached mine too. Just take a look at ...

Hi, I like this alot. Coming from someone who has very vivid dreams, you did an excellent job of making this feel like one. I do have one small nitpick ...

Hi, I enjoed this very much. The only change I would consider making has already been noted. I just wanted to say, if this is the first poem you ever ...

Standing in silence, the girl ran her fingers across the engraved lettering on the book she was holding. As she looked down at the letters she felt tears begin to ...

I loved this, it's so very... real. Even though it's meant as fiction, there is still a reality check in there too. Great job, really. It's very simple, but expresses ...

Ello, Like others when I read this I was a bit confused, but as I read the comments it makes more sense. I'm very glad he proved you wrong, and ...

Oh my goodness, this is very captivating. Very emotional, and sad... yet it leaves a couple questions. Like, where were they going? Is the child a little boy, or a ...

I've only just started this, but I have much written, if your curious to what the story is about feel free to PM me, or just ask on a review... ...

Wow.... That's the only word I can think to describe this, is just.... wow. I was near tears by the end of it. It' so sad, yet beautiful at the ...

Ello, This was very sweet, I even laughed at the cuteness of it. I loved the third verse, "Mom says, "NO GIRLS!" Haha that was just grand. I liked how ...

Hi there, First let me say, you have NO idea how much I can relate to this. It may not make sense to some people, but it makes perfect sense ...