Amberla93

Thank you all for the reviews! I tried to edit it somewhat. The reason for the title was, it was that sentence that inspired the entire story. "It's called a ...

“I called you, because I needed you to know something.” She said, looking down at her hands. “Tell me, please.” He whispered. “I never stopped loving you,” she said softly. ...

Hello, I'm here to give you a reveiw. :) What I edit will be in red. When I look at you I see faith, I feel trust, and I feel ...

You run from the darkness, trying to hide. Never knowing what’s inside. You’re trying to find a way, trying to find your way. Silly little girl, it’s been there all ...

This is amazing, so full of emotion, one could truthfully say that it's powerful. I love it, though I do have one small edit. In this line: " Because your ...

Hi, First of all, let me say...... You are wrong. this piece IS amazing. At least to me. I LOVE the truth of it. The first stanza caught my attention ...

Wow.. is all I can say to this.. simply wow...

Ello, Tis sweet, but a bit short. (And this is coming from a girl who writes many, many short things.) Maybe short is the wrong word.. It's rushed. Maybe you ...

Hello, I'm in love with this story! Why? Because I've been though the exact same thing. (Except the ending sadly.) I wouldn't change a thing. It's sweet, simple and many ...

I'm still working on it, so please bare with me. It's not finished either, hence the odd ending. Frustrated, I glared at him. He looked so smug that I wanted ...

Thank you all for the reveiws, they were very helpful.

Ok, so this one is better! But, just like Forsakinshadow said, you've got to get some more details in there, hon! This story is capturing my intrest quickly, but you ...

Hi there, As promised, I returned to read as soon as I was able. My editing skills may not be up to par at the moment, I have a killer ...

I am confused, or maybe I'm reading it wrong... I take it, whoever she is talking to has died? Lovley piece by the way... Maybe I just confused myself, I ...

Hi, I liked this alot, though it is very sad. I have nothing that I would change except what, BehindtheMask, has already pointed out. (It is very confusung when you ...