Amberla93

So sweet, but oh, so sad! I was near tears! I loved it, great job! :)

You did an amazing job of expessing what so many of us feel.. I loved the part about us only being human.. No, I loved the whole thing! Great job! ...

Hi I know those above me have alot of crtiques about the rhyiming and things of that nature. I however, love this. Maybe it's just because I can relate. I've ...

Hi! This is wondeful, and it was me not too long ago, though I havent been on in a while.. :/ The errors have been pointed out. But I just ...

I am frozen as the tears stream down my face. I’m lost in a whirlwind, trying to recognize this place... I’ve been here so many times before. But this time… ...

This is so cute! I love it. Though I did see something I thought I'd make not of, in this stanza: Afraid we will miss out, If we follow the ...

“Christina, Christina, can you hear me?” Without opening my eyes I mumbled a reply. “Yes, I hear you.” The Doctor sighed, “Believe it or not Christina, you’re one of the ...

Oh my word.... This is amazing. The ending, just kind of came out of nowhere. When the father shot Michal, I thought that was the charcter death you were talking ...

Agreed, but see now you can write more things and post those too! :p

Very Chazzy dear, but something didn't make sense to me... "I please that you take that step," Say what? You may want to edit that...

Um... please post more!! I was like so caught up in that, and then it just ended! So, please post more and let me know when you do! I didn't ...

I just want to say thank you to all of you for the reviews. I'm very grateful for all of the advice. And I'm glad those of you who liked ...

Hello, I am in love with this piece, truly, it is amazing. I was trasnfixed in moments and have read it over twice. I love how you kept the flow ...

Hi, I can find nothing wrong with this. In fact, I very much enjoyed it. I can relate to the girl in middle school, so it caught my attention early ...

I liked the poem itself.. the subject not so much. I was once the biggest American Idol fan to be found anywhere. But the show has changed so much over ...