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Re: A Dying Ember
Okay, here we go. First I would like to say, that this wasn;t stupid. It was quite grand actually. I'm used to reading much shorter things on here, such as ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Dear Sergio.
Hi, I just wanted to say that this was sweet, and beautiful, while painful at the same time. I liked the story itself, It almost made me cry. I'm sort ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: For years.
Do you remember? For years I tried to forget. But I couldn’t give up, my heart said “Not yet.” For years I pushed your memory aside. Even believed my love ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: love,the lover and the beloved.
This is very... clean cut. if that makes sense. I can feel you seem to be trying to put emotion in it, but it siimply isn't there, for me at ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
I liked this alot, because I have freinds who used to do this, but could never express why. You did a wonderful job with tdoing thatl, I didn't see any ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Who's To Say?
Ello, I've read dome of your pieces, and while I like them, I LOVE this poem. The message, the flow and the rhyming of it, everything. By far my favorite. ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye, my love.
This may have been full of clichés, but I liked it just the same. The italics gave it a light hearted feel, while the message you were trying to get ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: Wakeup Call
Thank all of you for your reviews. :) And for taking the time to read.
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: Wakeup Call
I was not going to post this, but a fellow YWS user, and friend suggested I post it. It's very emotional... in a way because it was based on my ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: Dear
I agree with PeaceAloha10! This would make a great song! I really liked it though it was a bit sad, kind of. I mean, I get it and the point ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: Dance In The Rain.
Hey there, It's been a long time since I've been online, much less reviewed anything. So please bear with me. :) First, I like the poem itself, I found I ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: I'm sorry.
I wrote this as a way of closure... I just lost an old childhood freind... If you don't mind, I'd love some help.. maybe the topic is causing me not ...
May 19, 2011 -
Re: Secret Inspiration
Hey, I can't put my finger on why... but I really like this piece. "But these thoughts and memories are faded and alas I cannot see. Because these memories are ...
May 19, 2011 -
Re: My greatest fear.
Ello, I too, am more of a writer, but the title caught my attention. Very nice photo, I take and edit pictures as my other hobby.. (You have to have ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Bad Memories
Sorry if it dosen't make sense... My emotions came out all jumbled.. My way of venting I suppose. It’s just another bad memory, a scare. A stab in the heart, ...
May 16, 2011
