Amberla93

Peronally, I loved the line; "At his demented words, I feel sick inside.Wanting to defend myself, but afraid to try." The poem itself is sad, but sometimes our lives are ...

I liked this, we should turn to God for all things.. But I thought I'd suggest something in the third stanza. You might want to change the first "apology" to ...

That was very cute, and very light hearted. Which is refreshing to see. :) Alot of times poetry is very sad.. good job

It is amazing just how quickly your feelings for someone can change. Often with no warning at all. It's hard to accept sometimes, and you always want the feeling you ...

I liked this alot. I'm very many people could relate to it, and we all like things we can relate to.. Good job :)

I think back to the days of when I loved you. Of when it was you who made my dreams come true. To the times you made me laugh, and ...