Amberla93

Goodness, I know there are many people who would agree and disagree to all or parts of this poem, I liked it though. In my opinion, real music can also ...

Hi there! I don't know why, but this made me laugh. Books are amazing by the way, all of them. They just are, because they are books! I love how ...

Ello, :) I found this awesome! :) And, I agree with Kafka, it does indeed make you think after reading it. In the line: By a "large/huge/none" cloud that wants ...

I wrote this with the help of a good friend. :) Let me wipe away your tears. Let me fight away your fears. Let me love you, let me love ...

Hello, Okay so,I liked this alot. (Not the subject of course, it's horrid that anyone could even think of doing that to anyone let alone a child.) But you did ...

Wow, this enchanted me, frightened me, and saddened me at the same time. I found it enchanting because of the way you worded it, I wanted to see what happened. ...

Hi there, I agree with those above me. This is powerful and so full of emotion, but the format in which it is presented distacts from that. Changing that would ...

Hello, Oh my goodness, this was so simple. Yet it has so much truth to it! I loved it. People are way too quick to judge. As for the length... ...

I liked this alot :D Sounded more like a farewell poem... Or more like The person dosent want to leave. I don't know... But I liked the way it ryhmed ...

Many of my friend's parents are divorced, insperation came from that. Hope you enjoy. The girl sat still and listened as they argued until she simply couldn’t take any longer. ...

I liked this poem alot, it shows how strong your faith is. And sometimes people (Like me) need to be reminded that God will never give us anything we cannot ...

I loved this, it's very true. Somehow it was light hearted, yet serious. I'm not sure how you did that, but it's really cool. :)

There are no Happily Ever Afters, Fairy Tale Endings, or Once Upon a Times, if in reality there is no true love, only in myths, stories and rhymes. I loved ...

Hi, Personally, I found this entire piece amazing. The only things I would mention you editing are the same as what Ester had said. With this in mind, I would ...

I think everyone tries to be what this poem calls "picture perfect" at some point in their lives... sometimes it seems you have no choice but to hide your pain... ...