Amberla93

Can I say that I love this?? I really, really do. While I do agree with the people above me, it does not really seem like a poem... But I ...

Thank you so much! I was not quite happy with this, and these changes make sense. Editing my work... not something I'm good at. So again, thanks!

Thank you for the review! I rather needed it, and it was quite helpful. I tend to write straight from emotion, and have the problem of reading what "I thought ...

This is so very full of emotion. I quite enjoyed reading it even though I was saddened by the end. I suppose you meant for that to happen though. Good ...

I hear the sound of them coming through the door. Fear grips me, taunting me, asking how much more? My heart starts pounding, my blood begins to race. I want ...

If love will make you do crazy things, then… what about fear? That crazy little feeling that tells you something bad is near… I often wonder… do we really understand ...

Name: Amira Rose Shannon. Age: 16 Gender: Female Dormitory: Centaur's Bow Hair (color, texture, length): An ash blonde with highlights a shade lighter. Long, comes just above her elbows, very ...

We’re not supposed to lie, cheat or steal. But for some people, those things are far too real. What about the little girl who was robbed of her innocence? Who ...

This.... This gave me chills. Maybe because I can relate to it so much, or maybe because it's just that good. Either way, I liked it. It is a bit ...

Thanks guys, I haven't been able to log on here in ages, so I haven't written in a long time either.. (Laptop died a few months back.) I'm glad ya'll ...

Through the years I've waited. Thinking it would happen when it was meant to. I had always considered myself patient, but then I met you. At first you seemed like ...

I like this, it's very... easy to relate to. I think we all have someone we need to forget. This is my favorite line: "I'll be pain free. My smile ...

Thank ya'll so much! I wrote this straight from the heart, so I'm glad that it seems to be well liked. It is based upon what I've been through, nothing ...

I liked this alot. Maybe becuase I can relate. It's so hard sometimes to bear the name 'Christian' because of feeling like a hypocrite. And I liked how you expressed ...

I catch myself staring out my window. I’m waiting, watching, hoping to know. Time passes slowly. And yet I can still hear the clock tick. Letting me know I’m still ...