Amberchelli

The walls are rising. The words are flying. The light is dying. Along with all we used to be. Your stealing my life. Sealing up the corners. Locking the doors. ...

awe, this is really cute, i'd love to see it become a little more longer, and a little bit of emotion, but i still do like it alot, and i ...

its a strange poem, i think many people will not like you saying that your god, it will probably cause some arguements, but yes i understand freedom of speech and ...

To fallow To guide, I never thought twice. To fight And forgive Was never as hard as this To run And mute Is what i have to do To keep ...

hmm.. i think this could turn into one of those life lesson kind of stories, your right something about the clouds, makes freedom seem like a possibility, it also shows ...

confuzzeled, is the main character gay? but either way i liked it, although you should make gender just a tad bit clearer.

i love it, its wonderful, awesome imagery, you seriously deserve like a gold freaking medal :DDDD let me know what else you've published.

ATTENTION READERS: this is as far as i could get, so any and all suggestions are helpful to help me finish. I see it in your eyes, We’ve grown apart ...

WOW!!!!!! Totally starts the book off with a BAM!, if this was a book, i dont think i'd be able to set it down, i just have one confusion [quote ...

Closed doors Hidden tears Music loud Drown out The fear. To let you go And to forget. never to remember The times we had. you left this world Taking my ...

i really liked this, i dont do grammer reviews i leave that to someone else, but i really liked this, its awesome, althought you could make it longer, but thats ...

at first, I thought the boy was mourning, over someone, but after your explanation, as i do find it very intelligent, and confusing in the same, I really liked it, ...

hmm… i am confused as to who the she is, in this poem, maybe its just me, seeming as it is 2 am, but i do like this, you have ...

funny, i just wrote a poem like this a few weeks ago, but i really like this, its like the break up, F you, poem. its one of my new ...

ok, so far i've only read this chapter, but i really like this,it seems that you have captured a new story, it hasnt been told before, its a refresh on ...