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Amberchelli

  • Homework Help Re: Reading Assignment

    I need to read Books about Addiction, preferably in teens. Any Ideas?

    Mar 9, 2012
  • Lounge, The Re: Your Help Club (Come in, We're open.)

    How long have you been on YWS?: uh. about a year. What was your motivation for joining, both YWS and YHC?: YWS, i wanted to publish a book. YWC? I ...

    Mar 8, 2012
  • Lounge, The Re: Songs that stir your emotions.

    Hemmorage by Fuel, Mockingbird by Eminem. those songs made me full out cry,

    Mar 8, 2012
  • Other Poetry Re: Untitled

    In the fallen tears, In the peaceful death. There are no scars on my wrist. No cuts to make. My pain is on the inside. Trapped instead. Treading the water, ...

    Jan 27, 2012
  • Other Poetry Re: Who Am I?

    Who am I? After the storm. After the rain. After the tears. Who am i? After the lies And the people who cry. Who am I? After the grey skies. ...

    Dec 25, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Pain Free

    You asked me what was i afraid of? My fears of being hurt. Now like a child Without a night-light Scared to lift the blankets. My fears Were almost gone. ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Done.

    I'm done The scars finally showing, The tears finally flowing. I'm done. i surrender. Isn't that what you want to hear? I'm gone, my soul crushed. As the tears fall. ...

    Dec 1, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Detective Stetson and the Bayview Bomber

    i like it, its quite interesting, but i think you should make what made him so ocd a little more apparent, why is he the way he is, it would ...

    Nov 13, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Hit By That Train

    WOW!!!!! this is realllllyyyyyy GOOOD!!!! my favorite part was Not dead, not yet Not for a hard long time Wounded, the front of that train really wasn’t fluff Hit by ...

    Oct 28, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Where do you write?

    for me my best inspiration is either in my room, or sometimes i have great ideas in like Math or Chem, its funny because none of my poems revolve around ...

    Oct 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Exhaustion

    hahahahaha i think you just captured every teenagers mind-process after a few hours of homework, you definitely got mine, its cool though, you definitely have a point, and it makes ...

    Oct 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Knight

    Could you just say “Im here” Could you just say “ I love you” Couldn't you just be there when I needed you the most Couldn’t you just hold me ...

    Oct 26, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Humorous Pain

    *wipes tears* THIS IS TRAGIC….good poem BUT TRAGIC… im changing your name to shakepere… (idk how to spell that…) its really sad, but easy to fallow and understand..

    Oct 19, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Bare

    well, it could use a little help, but overall its understandable, the message should get clearer, if you make it longer, but im just saying, i liked it, i guess ...

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: To Mom

    WOW, I REALLLY REALLY REALLY LIKED THIS, now if you ask my family.. i have no emotion, heart.. or compassion… but this really really almost made me cry, and welcome ...

    Oct 15, 2011


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