AlyssaKyle

I freaking love this Missy!It took me a few minutes to realize that Mike and Cam were the same person. This is definitely a unique idea that I never would ...

I have to disagree with the other reviews you have recieved so far in the sense that I enjoy the way you used repetition. It emphasizes your point, and though ...

Hey there! I am a big supporter of authors using rhyme scheme and overall structure however they want to, becuase that is the point of poetry. However, I was a ...

I love this poem, especially thebeginning of it. the rhyme scheme flowed very well and did not feel forced at all like it often can. I like poems that switch ...

“I still don’t understand why you’re making me take piano lessons,” the boy griped, swishing his shaggy auburn hair out of his eyes. He was slumped down in the passenger ...

In general, I enjoyed this poem. I must admit that the frequent changes in rhyme scheme threw me a bit, but I don;t know whether you had a specific purpose ...

I appreciate your willingness to try such a new and difficult style! I was a little confused at some points, but overall I think you did a pretty good job ...

A red balloon dirtied the otherwise blank canvas that was the sky on the cheery Tuesday morning. Not a single cloud was present for miles. Somewhere in the park was ...

I do believe the purpose of this site is to give constructive critizism, not rip the person on what a horrible job they did. I know the line breaks are ...

I couldn’t remember What had happened earlier That day. My head was Throbbing, but my body Was numb. I forced my Eyes open, tearing apart The film that had formed ...

I am currently at 33,349. I'm addicted to this thing!

Thanks.And I know those are a bit messed up, but i had to follow a format putting certain repeated words in a specific place.

He sits by the fire With a blanket across his lap, A cup of steaming coffee in his hands. On his feet are his favorite worn leather shoes, Given to ...

i like the message behind this. I think it is okay that the poem has no stanzas. It's our poem and you can do what you want with it in ...

Thanks for reading it Justin. nd yes, sway and back are supposed to be two words, that was a typo on my part. And I like the calluses comment. I ...