AlyssaKyle

The rhyming is sporadic and it through me off when reading the poem. I'm not sure if you meant to rhyme or if it just happened, but if you did ...

Normally I don't comment on the lenght of a poem as long as the entire story is told. However, in this case I feel that it is too short. We ...

Hello! As a general rule of thumb, try to keep your stanzas the same length unless they come at the very end of he poem. The one with three lines ...

I liked how your line breaks were slightly off. However, it would have improved the flow of your poem if there were a few more commas in certain places. I'd ...

Hey there! I truly enjoyed reading this story. I understand what you were trying to accomplish with the second paragraph, but I would have prefered it if you saved some ...

Okay, first I shall throw my nitpicks at you! (I apoologize but I do not know how to quote things) On the fifth lin "Until I reach the very top ...

There was nothing Elizabeth enjoyed more than the smell that rushed her nose upon entering a stable. The very scent that revolted most people excited her. The hay was like ...

I agree that some punctuation would be helpful to teh flow of the poem. Aslo, try to keep your stanzas the same length or realtively the same if at all ...

I don't think there is a length limit on how long a poem can be. But I would suggest that you make your stanzas the same length-it is easiers for ...

I have to say, I really enjoyed reading this. I am typically not a fan of either reetition or rhyming, but you did both very well here. The rhyming did ...

I like the way you aren't exactly in the center-I feel as if it makes the photograph moree interesting. I agree that you may want to play with the color ...

I really like the boldness in the separation of colors. The monochratic background makes the bird really pop. The blending may have gone a little smoother, but the way it ...

I felt that the lack of punctuation interruptd the flow of the poem. When I realized that I had hit the end of a sentence I had to go back ...

This reminds me of something I do when I hae a lot of paint leftover when I'm finished with what I was doing before. I like how each of the ...

I love this picture. Because you were able to get so close, we can really see the texture of the feathers and all the different colors. Typically, I personally prefer ...